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Sunday, 21 October 2018

New Year! New You!




INTERESTED IN WELLBEING, CREATIVE WRITING OR MEMOIR? 

I am running another online course on Keeping a Journal. Starting January, there'll be weekly postings - instruction, inspiration, and writing prompts – all for less than the price of a cup of coffee. And you can join a linked Facebook group! Interested? Contact me if you have questions or want to sign up! On enrolment, you'll also be entitled to my FREE guide, 'Almost Everything you needed to know about keeping a journal!' This will give you some ideas to play with before the course begins in mid-January! Do hope you'll join us!

Goodbye, Tax Form 2018!

Celebrating the departure of the tax form! So - for two weeks, I have discounted 'The Wolf of Dalriada' to £6.99 on my website, https://elizabeth-gates.com. (Until October 31st)

Order your signed copy now for a good read during cosy Autumn evenings.

Monday, 30 July 2018

What can you get for less than the price of a cup of coffee?

INTERESTED IN WELLBEING, CREATIVE WRITING OR MEMOIR? I am running an on-line course on Keeping a Journal. Starting September, weekly postings - instruction, inspiration, and writing prompts all for less than the price of a cup of coffee. And a linked Facebook group! Interested? For more information, see the News page of the Lonely Furrow Company Website (https://lonelyfurrowcompany.com) and DM me if you have questions or to sign up by August 16th! You'll also be entitled to my FREE guide, Almost Everything you needed to know about keeping a journal! This will give you some ideas to play with before the course begins in mid-September! Do hope you'll join us!

Tuesday, 29 May 2018

The Wolf of Dalriada by Elizabeth Gates | Review | Historical Novels Review

The Wolf of Dalriada by Elizabeth Gates | Review | Historical Novels Review: Confused by the frequent changes of location, date and point of view, it took some time for me to come to grips with this episodic…

The Wolf of Dalriada by Elizabeth Gates | Review | Historical Novels Review

The Wolf of Dalriada by Elizabeth Gates | Review | Historical Novels Review: Confused by the frequent changes of location, date and point of view, it took some time for me to come to grips with this episodic…

Monday, 24 July 2017

What can Beta Readers do for you?

Phew! 80,000 words of 'The Wolf of Dalriada - Part 2' are now winging their way to the Beta Readers! A significant moment. But who are Beta Readers and what do they do? Brenda Pollard answers these questions clearly and my own feeling is that Beta Readers are vital to the big picture.
I also provide my Beta Readers with a list of questions to guide their thinking. Not that they need much guidance but I do want to make the most of their expertise as talented readers. The questions I pose are:
  1. People?
    Does each character work?
    Is there consistency even when there is change/ development?
    Do they seem real?
    Is their speech distinct and typical of them?
    Do you care what happens to them?
  2. Setting?
    Is the setting authentic?
    Has too much detail (research) been included?
    Are there any historical inaccuracies - factual; linguistic?
  3. Plotting?
    Are any scenes or sections unnecessary or superfluous - for example, is Chapter 3 in the right place?
    Is the pacing is too slow/too fast at any point?
    Are there any plot-holes or inconsistencies?
    Does the story engage you?
    Did you know how this story was going to end? Was this a problem?
    Please look out for any repetitions and/or too much inclusion of first story in the series?
  4. Anything else?

This list may also be useful for your own self-editing. It certainly concerns itself with the bigger picture. This is called developmental or content editing and does not involve your very kind Beta Readers in proof reading or copy editing. Those are professional areas - necessary and fee-paying. Contact the Society of Editors and Proofreaders for a practitioner near you.

Twitter note!

July 26th 2017 2pm - 3pm @vintageradio08 is hosting Wirral authors. I'll be reading 'Mary's Marsh' – a story of the Dee Estuary. Join me.

Thursday, 20 July 2017

Let's get physical!

For ideas about what to do when looking for the perfect day job for a writer, see https://elizabeth-gates.com/index.php/blog/

Monday, 10 July 2017

With a little help from my friends!

When I first announced that I wanted to attend a writing group – as a participant not a facilitator – someone looked me blankly in the eye and asked ‘Why?’ There I was, the author of two novels, a long-serving and published freelance journalist, a writing coach, a writing group facilitator …?

But, since the question was asked, it hasn’t taken me long to think of six reasons why I should. A little more time and I could probably think of more.

So - here we go:

  1. As a working writer, you need beta readers. These informed non-professional ‘readers’ can tell in a flash what works and what doesn’t in a chunk of your work in progress (WIP).
  2. Reading aloud shows you the flaws in your own piece. When you run out of breath, for example, you know your sentence is too long.
  3. During tea-break, you have the stimulus of chatting to like-minded folk over a custard cream. Introverted writers can be lonely people.  A writers’ group connects you to the human race.
  4. The writers’ group can set a standard, set the bar. You may be way above it but  ‘Oh, how comforting!’ You may fall well below – in which case, try harder.
  5. The writers’ group – with their friends and family – make up a possible market. If you entertain them, they may remember your book when doing their Christmas shopping.
  6. A writers’ group is a pool of distilled wisdom and knowledge. One off-piste discussion at a writers’ group I attended recently embraced the funeral customs of Europe and how they differed. Inspiration for another piece of writing!

So, where do you find these wonderful groups of people? Local libraries, colleges and universities are sure to welcome you to their Continuing Education Creative Writing groups. Or, in the Uk, contact the National Association of Writers’ Groups to find a group near you  and, in the rest of the English-speaking world, google for similar organisations. Personally, I belong to a UK-based U3A (University of the Third Age) group. This is an international organisation (see World U3A ) and I wouldn’t be without them!


Friday, 26 May 2017

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Wednesday, 15 February 2017

The secret pleasures of research!


The secret pleasures of Research

You may write contemporary fiction. You may write historical adventure. You may even write romance – in any of its forms. What all of these options have in common is – research! You cannot contain all you need to know in your brain so – whether internet, library, bookshop, friend’s bookcases – you have to go somewhere to find out what you need to know.
In my case, one area of particular interest to me is 18th Century France and Scotland. So – with this in mind – I am preparing a list of the books I consulted while writing ‘The Wolf of Dalriada’ and which I will post on my website in due course.
However, here are a few pointers for your own research. Go-to sources include:
  • visiting locations
  • libraries for goverment reports and documents
  • contemporary newspaper archives
  • diaries
  • maps
  • fashion plates
  • recipes
  • laws
  • medical papers and practices
  • essays on contemporary social conditons such as prison
  • biographies and memoirs
But make notes as you go. it’ll save you an afternoon searching for that one particular fact.
And, when you have imbued yourself with the period and you begin to write your story, remember to stick to the plot. You may find all sorts of facts fascinating but, if they care about anything at all, your reader will quite simply want to know what is going to happen to your characters. That is not denigrating the ‘setting’ – time and place. It is simply controlling these story elements in a role subservient to the story.  You are after all telling a story. Not educating the reader!

Monday, 13 February 2017

Surprise . . .!

One of the many lovely advantages of being reviewed is publisher contact. However, one reviewer  erroneously called my historical adventure 'The Wolf of Dalriada' a 'bodice-ripper' and I was subsequently approached by a publisher of soft porn and erotica. I leave you to imagine my jaw-dropped surprise. There are lessons here for reviewers, I think. [book:The Wolf of Dalriada|32592974]

Friday, 20 January 2017

Banking a new review

5* review for 'The Wolf of Dalriada', this time by reviewer Peggy Slater, placed by on various Webpages.Something to add to my Amazon reviews. Becoming a collector!

Thursday, 29 December 2016

Ray Bradbury's quote on writing first drafts.

About First Drafts. Much of my activity with clients is balancing their expectations of their First Draft. They expect it to be perfect. It will only very rarely be. But it has to be written with passion and - as Ray Bradbury says -  no interference. Editing comes later. https://mobile.twitter.com/GaryJMcLaren/status/664634355839447044/photo/1


Friday, 9 December 2016

The Official Side of being an Author

A busy week, joining useful organisations such as the Public Lending Rights Agency (dealing with borrowings of ‘The Wolf of Dalriada’ from UK Public Libraries) and the Authors’ Licensing & Collecting Society. The ALCS is on the watch for photocopying and foreign borrowings. This is the official bit.

Monday, 28 November 2016

Release Date!

Well, I was expecting something a little more spectacular. Perhaps not in the style of the Millenium Bug but something to register the change of state from pre-publication to publication! However, 'The Wolf of Dalriada' seems to be well represented on the World Wide Web and available for purchase (as print and/or e-book) from Troubador Books and Amazon.
So - a modest celebration! I have just registered with the Public Lending Right agency and - in due course - three or four days - you should be able to borrow 'The Wolf of Dalriada' from public libraries. The pecuniary advantage to me will be small but it will exist so please do borrow 'The Wolf' as often as you can. Thank you.

Sunday, 30 October 2016

Preparation for writing

https://www.facebook.com/LizzieGates1/posts/10155440313228642  the important thing is to read as much and as often as you can. But also, of course, there are times when my imagination's so fired up with my writing, to read something else could be terminal for the WiP. So at an earlier stage, I regard 'reading' everything possible as part of my 'research'. How do other writers cope?

Monday, 17 October 2016

Strange text display.

Sorry for the uneven text display in the previous post. For a clearer view, see my blog on my author website. Thank you

Holiday reading for a Novelist?

Holiday reading for a novelist? Well, novels of course but not necessarily or exclusively. At the moment, I am reading about the best extant pieces of an eighteenth century French silversmith and I have learned that ‘masterpiece’ was the piece that an apprentice made to demonstrate his readiness to assume the title ‘master’. I always thought a masterpiece was the best piece of work in a craftsman’s whole output. Refinements to knowledge like this are always useful. Another example! Yesterday, I learned that dairy bulls are more aggressive than beef bulls because, when they are brought up on the bottle, they think they are human. And, when their physical attributes prompt them, they regard humans – not other bulls – as the creatures they need to dominate. I don’t know what I shall do with these tidbits of information, gleaned in a deck chair. But I shall certainly do something.